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Post by dasey4ever on Jul 29, 2007 14:20:39 GMT -5
Hi everyone this is my thread for my new fanfic story Secret Love, whichis a Dasey story. I have only written the first chapter so far, so tell me what you think and I am in the process of writing the 2nd chapter! Thanx Everyone
P.S. I posted this in the other board, but then I thought of another part of my story, I haven't written it yet, but it will be mature content or w/e so I had to delete it and move it here.
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Post by dasey4ever on Jul 29, 2007 14:20:57 GMT -5
Chapter 1: Derek’s Realization
“Sam, I just don’t get it!” Derek confides to his best friend.
“What’s not to get? You like Casey. I really don’t see how you don’t get that!” Sam states knowingly.
Derek shifts his phone to the other hand. “Yeah, but what I DON’T get is, why do I always act like…like…like….”
“You hate her?” Sam says cutting Derek off.
“Ummm yeah, exactly, how did you know?” Derek asks.
“WOW, D, are you serious, I just said how u ALWAYS act around her.” Sam says rolling his eyes at his confused friend.
Derek stares and then feeling stupid says, “Ohhhh.”
“Yeah and I have another question you have known Casey for a year! How long have you liked her?” Sam asks curiously.
“Okay….I know this is gonna sound weird, but… since I first saw her…I think.” Derek states staring at Casey’s closed bedroom door.
“Really? You have liked her for a year and haven’t said anything, and still went on dates with other girls? D I don’t get it. And why are you just telling me now?” Sam asks really confused now.
“Well, I guess I’ve know all along, but I’m just realizing it now. I don’t know what to do! I went on a date last night and I wasn’t really into it because I realized I liked Casey…and Sam you are not going to believe this...but…but…but….”
“But WHAT? Just spit it out!” Sam yells getting annoyed at how long it’s taking Derek to just say what he needs to say.
“I didn’t want to kiss my date!” Derek says sounding depressed.
“But…if you liked her all along then why is it affecting you just now?”
“I don’t know that’s why, I’m asking you!” Derek says annoyed now that am doesn’t know the answer.
“Okaaaaaaay then, well I guess its because your realizing it now, but what did this girl do when you didn’t kiss her, and who were you on a date with?”
“I was on a date with Brittany Yorkie, you know the hot girl in our French class.”
“Awww man, you couldn’t realize your obsession with Casey AFTER your date with Brittany?” Sam asked.
“Oh my god, SAM! That is NOT the point, the point is, what do I do about Casey?” Derek asked desperately.
“Oh….ummm...tell her?” Sam said unsurely.
“Sam, Sam, Sam, this is Casey we are talking about, now after these 12 months of me hating her do you really think she will believe me if I walk up to her and go Casey, umm I like you.” Derek says sarcastically.
“Oh I can just see what she would say.” Sam states laughing.
“DER-EK!” Sam and Derek say at the same time.
Sam and Derek start laughing and then Casey walks out of her bedroom and stands in the doorway of Derek’s room.
“DER-EK! Get OFF the phone, I need to call Emily!” Casey complains
“DER-EK! Get off the phone!” Derek mocks.
“Uhhhh, your soooo immature!” Casey statses and leaves the room muttering something under her breath about how infuriating Derek is.
“SOOOO anyway where were we Sam.” Derek says purposely loud so Casey will here him.
“Ummm how you’re going to tell Casey you like her.” Sam says in a umm how did you forget that sort of tone.
Derek walks across the room and closes the door, so he could tell Sam, what he just figured out.
“Sam, I don’t think I like her.” Derek says dramtically.
“What do YOU mean YOU don’t like her? What the…….”
Derek cuts him off. “I don’t think I like her…..I think I LOVE her!”
“Oh come on you just realized you like her after a year, but now your saying you love her?”
“Yeah, I’m just remembering on TV how when the characters loved each other they acted mean to each other at first and then one of them realized they like the other character and told a friend, and that’s what I’m doing with you. The character always realized the love each other after that. I know, I know it sounds all lovey dovey, but you don’t feel what I feel when I’m in the same room as her.”
“Oh... dude, I really don’t know what you should do, look I got to go. Bye!” Sam says and then Derek hears Sam click off, meaning he’s not there anymore.
“Oh God, what am I going to do?” Derek asks himself clicking off the phone!
~~END OF CHAPTER 1~~
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Post by dasey4ever on Jul 29, 2007 14:22:08 GMT -5
Chapter 2: Casey’s Realization
“Hey Em.” Casey greeted her friend.
“Hey Case. Derek finally got off the phone?” Emily asked.
“Yeah how did yeah know he was on the phone?” Casey wondered
“Umm, you said you would call me back in 15 minutes and that was an hour ago.”
“Ohh, he was on the phone with Sam, I don’t know what could have been so important that he had be on the phone for an hour!” Casey complained as usual about Derek.
“Okay, now what was the important thing you had to tell me?” Emily asked wondering what her best friend was going to tell her, it must be important if she had to call her back so she could think of words to describe what she was going to tell her.
“I really don’t know how to say this, I’m probably wrong, yeah I’m wrong, I mean I have to be right?” Casey asks in wonderment to herself.
“I might be able to give you an answer if I knew what you were TALKING about Casey?”
“Okay, I know this is going to sound completely absurd, but I think I might like Derek.” Casey says amazed at what she was saying.
“WHAT?!?” Emily asks even more amazed than Casey was.
“I know! I can’t explain it, I just have this weird feeling when I’m around him, not a feeling like I hate him, but like a feeling I have when I have a crush on someone! I don’t even believe what I’m saying I MUST be wrong!”
“Who knows, maybe you should talk to him, see if he has the same feeli….”
“YA right, we are talking about DEREK!” Casey cuts Emily off.
“I know but, maybe, just, maybe he feels the same way.”
“You know what I’m just going to ignore these feeling, I probably don’t really like him, I’m not going to put to much thought into these supposed feelings.”
“Oh okay, but if you want to talk about it just call me, okay?” Emily tells her friend.
“Edwin, Lizzie, Derek, Casey, Marti, DINNER!” Nora yells up the stairs.
“Okay, well I got to go, Mom is calling me for dinner.” Casey says and clicks off the phone.
“These feeling aren’t real, they CAN’T be!” Casey says trying to reassure herself
~~END OF CHAPTER 2~~
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Post by dasey4ever on Jul 29, 2007 14:39:46 GMT -5
So tell me wha you think I'm ging to write the third chapter soon
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Post by dasey4ever on Jul 29, 2007 19:02:05 GMT -5
Chapter 3: The Confusion At Dinner
Everyone is sitting around the dinner table waiting to eat.
“Nora, why can’t we eat I’m starving!” Edwin complains while trying to steal a piece of chicken, but Lizzie hits his hand away.
“We have to wait for Derek and Edwin if you touch the food again your not gonna eat tonight.” George warns Edwin.
“But we always start without Derek.” Edwin complains not giving up.
“That’s when he’s not home. But he’s right upstairs, I’m sure he will be down in a minute.” Nora says trying to be patient.
At that moment Derek walks down the stairs, and everyone stares at him. Then Edwin yells, “YES, I can eat!”
“What’s everyone staring at?” Derek asks confused.
“I called you 15 minutes ago for dinner.” Nora says annoyed.
“Oh well, I heard you, but I was thinking about something and I didn’t want to lose the thought. You could have started without me you know”
“Ee, I wold wu we could stawt without hem.” Edwin says with a mouth full of chicken and stuffing even more chicken in his mouth.
“Ewww Edwin don’t talk with your mouth full!” Casey yells at him disgusted.
Edwin stuck his tongue out at Casey showing her a tongue with half chewed food on it.
“EWW I’m trying to eat!” Casey says gagging.
“Yeah me to!” Lizzie says giving Edwin a disgusted look and Edwin sticks his tongue out at Lizzie.
George gives Edwin a look like if he doesn’t stop he’s going to be REALLY sorry and he stops.
“Well, for once I wanted to eat like a family since your never home for dinner.” Nora says.
“Yeah, so just sit down and eat Derek!” George commands Derek.
Wow, his hair looks kind of hot like that! Whoa, Casey you did NOT just say that. Come on snap out of it Casey, you DON’T really like him! Oh my god he just moved his head and his hair moved into his eyes, it looks even hotter, why is he doing this to me? Snap out of it Ca…
Lizzie is tapping me on the shoulder and I turn and look at her, she motions for me to come closer and I lean down closer to her while she whispers something in my ear.
“Why are you staring at Derek?” She whispers.
“Oh…..umm….well..the way he was chewing was disgusting.” Casey whispers back.
“Eww why would you be staring at that then?” Lizzie asks.
“I don’t know I guess I was just amazed at how disgusting it was, I mean I didn’t know it was possible to look so disgusting while eating!” Casey says hoping that that was a good enough excuse to please her sister.
It doesn’t look like Lizzie bought it, but she drops the subject and continues eating.
I didn’t notice I was still staring at him, until he goes, “Umm, can I help you?”
“Oh, um, no, why do you ask?” Casey asks trying to cover up that she was staring at him.
“Maybe, because you were at staring at him.” Edwin retorts.
“She was staring at him because she was amazed at how disgusting his chewing was.” Lizzie joins in.
“What the fu…!” Derek starts.
“DEREK Marti is here!” Nora cuts him off before he could finish his sentence.
“Why did Smerek have to stop what he was saying because I’m here!” Marti asks confused.
“Because….because….just because, okay?” George badly explains to Marti.
“Because Marti, Derek is bad and was going to say a bad word that you’re not supposed to hear.” Casey explained.
“Oh.” Marti said.
“Can we just have a peaceful dinner for once, PLEASE?” Nora pleaded with her family.
Everyone sat there quietly and ate for the rest of the time.
“Can I be excused, I have homework.” Casey asked.
“Fine.” Nora said.
Thank god, it took every force of my being not to look at Derek! If I had to stay at that table any longer there’s no way I would have been able to stop myself from looking at him.
Derek gets up and starts to walk up the stairs, but then, George asks, “Can’t you be at least a little respectful and ask to be excused?”
“I never have before, why start now?” and with that he walked up the stairs.
“I should have taught him better manners.” George says regretting how he taught his sons.
“It’s okay Dad, we all make mistakes.” Edwin says.
George glares at him and Edwin looks away.
“Edwin your excused.” George tells him.
“But Dad, I’m not d…”
“LEAVE!”
“Okay, okay, don’t have a cow!” He says as he gets up to leave.
“Daddy, I don’t want these brussel sprouts.” Marti complains.
“Fine, your excused, too, Marti.” George says annoyed with his children’s manners.
“Okay, ummm, I guess I’m done now.” Lizzie says and gets up, and walks up the stairs.
“Well that was a nice family dinner.” Nora says sarcastically.
“Yeah, I know.” George says.
“Did you see Casey staring at Derek?” Nora asks.
“Yeah what was up with that, she was amazed at how disgusting he was eating Lizzie said.”
“I know, I think there’s something up with them. We have to find out, let’s pay more attention to Casey and Derek.” Nora says, trying to figure out what’s going on with her two oldest kids.
~~END OF CHAPTER 3~~
tell me what you think
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Post by dasey4ever on Aug 25, 2007 18:01:47 GMT -5
okay...im sorry i havent posted anything else of this story, if anyone even cares. But, I posted it on fanfiction.net I know the first three chapters sucked, but it gets better. I actually finished it already and have posted four chapters of the sequel. Heres the llink www.fanfiction.net/s/3689789/1/Secret_Love my name on there is lwdanddegrassiluver94 if u want 2 read the sequel look in my profile
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